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Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 13 May 2011, 21:54
by The Raven
Maybe it is best
to do six on last line
get more views that way!

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 14 May 2011, 00:11
by Garion
Ah I just noticed
The error that I had done,
Thank you for telling.

For the nosey ones
who want to know of the word,
it was the word "lots" :)

On a side note though,
Come on Cardiff, lets beat them
And go up, BLUEBIRDSSS*!! :D

*Sorry ;)

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 14 May 2011, 19:43
by Going Underground
tubeguru wrote:
Going Underground wrote:Oh dear my Welsh Friend (5)
You have done same as Sir Soup (7)
six on the last line! (5)
Er, "you have done same"?
You can't make "errors" like this
Just to make sense now.
I cannot see where
My Haiku is incorrect
Its five seven five

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 14 May 2011, 20:10
by tubeguru
Going Underground wrote:
tubeguru wrote:
Going Underground wrote:Oh dear my Welsh Friend (5)
You have done same as Sir Soup (7)
six on the last line! (5)
Er, "you have done same"?
You can't make "errors" like this
Just to make sense now.
I cannot see where
My Haiku is incorrect
Its five seven five
I didn't say it was wrong. You left out a word so it would fit. And no, this is not a Haiku - it's easier to explain this way.

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 23 Jun 2011, 23:47
by Going Underground
It is sad to see
That this thread is already
behind Tumbleweed :cry:

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 24 Jun 2011, 14:25
by The Raven
It is really sad
Tumbleweed is popular
On this good forum

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 24 Jun 2011, 14:28
by tubeguru
They'll get bored of it
Five weed, fifteen weed. Losers
They should wait for bells

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 24 Jun 2011, 14:31
by Going Underground
Haiku will be strong
After Tumbleweed has gone
No weed but 2 bells

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 24 Jun 2011, 14:42
by Steeevooo
I would like some weed
Of a different kind please.
Helps get through the day.

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 01 Sep 2011, 19:09
by tubeguru
What the hell was that?
This thread started years ago;
Still nothing makes sense.

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 01 Sep 2011, 19:51
by The Raven
scrxisi wrote:And mum if you punch
Him in the junk you'll get no
Disrespect from me
You have sky one then?
Watching "the Simpsons" today?
I call your bluff Matt!

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 01 Sep 2011, 20:24
by greatkingrat
New station opened
Stratford International
Who will break record?

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 01 Sep 2011, 21:45
by Starkey7
This must be the world's
Worst Haiku, because it's just
A normal sentence.

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 01 Sep 2011, 21:48
by snudge27
Oh I love Haikus
Haikus are just so much fun
I'm a Haiku fan

Re: Haiku Competition

Posted: 01 Sep 2011, 21:51
by Starkey7
I'm not feeling good.
Someone came along and claimed
For weed just before me.