Haiku Competition

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Maybe it is best
to do six on last line
get more views that way!
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Ah I just noticed
The error that I had done,
Thank you for telling.

For the nosey ones
who want to know of the word,
it was the word "lots" :)

On a side note though,
Come on Cardiff, lets beat them
And go up, BLUEBIRDSSS*!! :D

*Sorry ;)
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tubeguru wrote:
Going Underground wrote:Oh dear my Welsh Friend (5)
You have done same as Sir Soup (7)
six on the last line! (5)
Er, "you have done same"?
You can't make "errors" like this
Just to make sense now.
I cannot see where
My Haiku is incorrect
Its five seven five
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Going Underground wrote:
tubeguru wrote:
Going Underground wrote:Oh dear my Welsh Friend (5)
You have done same as Sir Soup (7)
six on the last line! (5)
Er, "you have done same"?
You can't make "errors" like this
Just to make sense now.
I cannot see where
My Haiku is incorrect
Its five seven five
I didn't say it was wrong. You left out a word so it would fit. And no, this is not a Haiku - it's easier to explain this way.
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It is sad to see
That this thread is already
behind Tumbleweed :cry:
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It is really sad
Tumbleweed is popular
On this good forum
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They'll get bored of it
Five weed, fifteen weed. Losers
They should wait for bells
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Haiku will be strong
After Tumbleweed has gone
No weed but 2 bells
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I would like some weed
Of a different kind please.
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What the hell was that?
This thread started years ago;
Still nothing makes sense.
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New station opened
Stratford International
Who will break record?
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This must be the world's
Worst Haiku, because it's just
A normal sentence.
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Oh I love Haikus
Haikus are just so much fun
I'm a Haiku fan
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I'm not feeling good.
Someone came along and claimed
For weed just before me.
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